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Finding my path's avatar

'and I open myself like a holy book written in skin.'

Sapphra, this is gorgeous! The words you laced together with such sensuous desire, the agonizingly slow edging I felt as I meandered my way trhough.

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Thank you so much for this. I love that you felt that sensuous pull, that slowness as you moved through the poem. That's exactly what I was reaching for. Your words mean everything. Thanks for always supporting my work. You are awesome. 😘

Finding my path's avatar

You always reach deep inside and touch me… thank you

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Thank you for being such a loyal reader.

Rosalie Fox {} Erotic Dream's avatar

A triumph, Sapphra. feminine rhythm, sound, ecstasy all through me. beautiful, beautiful. xx

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Thank you so much! I’m such a fan of your work. It means the world to me that you enjoyed my poem.

Rosalie Fox {} Erotic Dream's avatar

♥️♥️

Rahk Williams-Person's avatar

Beautifully powerful

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Thank you so much!

Joey Lloyd's avatar

not asking any more. demanding.

Who Is The Stranger?'s avatar

Beautiful ❤️‍🔥

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Thank you so much!

Who Is The Stranger?'s avatar

My pleasure 😌

You're so talented 🫶🏾✨

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Well thank you so much. I appreciate the compliment. That’s very kind of you.

Linda Blatnik's avatar

very effective :)

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Thank you very much.

Venusian Gardens's avatar

Oh wow! The structure was very effective. I thoroughly enjoyed this one. It had me knotting my fingers in my own hair over how hot it was. 🙇🏽‍♀️

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Thank you so much! I'm really glad the structure of the poem landed the way I intended. I love knowing that it had such a physical effect on you and that it made you feel it that intensely. That's exactly what I was going for when I wrote it. This means so much.

Ryan Eland's avatar

‘a bridge between earth and sky’

this is a masterpiece Sapphra. I’m a puddle under your poet’s tongue. gorgeous.❤️‍🔥

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Stop, you're going to make me blush. 😊 The fact that my words had you in a puddle like that? That's the dream. Thank you for feeling it so deeply and for telling me.