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Kaia's avatar

I love how this refuses polish.

Breath, skin, silence and that steady quiet underneath the fire.

Sapphra Undone's avatar

Thank you for sharing that with me. It truly means a great deal to know thoat my words resonated so deeply with you.

Andrew Rosetta's avatar

“ in that fragile,

blazing moment,

we surrender

to the pull of now,

unfolding what it means

to lose ourselves”

Thank you for writing such thoughtful insightful words you have described desire every aptly

Sapphra Undone's avatar

Thank you so much for reading. I’m glad that this piece resonated with you.

Heart Unshackled's avatar

I don't think it needed any change. You were right to leave it as is.