Oh, I love that! And in case my writing doesn't make it obvious, I'm constantly trying to push my poems past just the physical side of human nature. It's the hope, at least.
Gorgeous verse Sapphra! The word pictures are descriptive enough to feel her desire.
"surrendering as a choice, as an active movement into vulnerability", the thought of surrendering into vulnerability - I think this perfectly describes my submissive tendencies. I've thought about this alot over the years, how a strong man can submit: give up control to another. This makes it so clear.
I absolutely love how You shared the thought process behind the words. I often wonder what is behind the writer’s intent. How we interpret each piece is based on our own experiences. I love knowing the meaning behind the projection. Thank You. It is beautiful.
Thank you. I always try to include a little bit of background on the poem. I used to use it as an introduction to the poem, but it felt more like I was leading the reader, which dilutes the poem. Lately, I’ve been adding it to the end so I can really get into the nitty-gritty after the reader has experienced the poem naturally.
You have the power to make me feel your words phisically. I feel it all.
Loved itm
Thank you very much. I’m glad that my poem was able to touch you so deeply.
I feel this poem in my bones. I love the title of it too. Turn toward. Yes.
Thank you so much. I like knowing the words didn’t stay on the page for you.
Beautiful, Sapphra.
Thank you. It’s good to know the work stirred something true in you.
Beautiful. I love the burning forest reference and the feeling of choosing to be unmade. Powerful words and thoughts 🔥🔥❤️
I really appreciate that. I’m honored the poem and author’s notes touched you in such a way.
Immense in gravity — this was golden intricacy of human chemistry 👌🏼🪽
Thank you so much. I’m glad that you enjoyed this one.
this is how i feel about God.
Oh, I love that! And in case my writing doesn't make it obvious, I'm constantly trying to push my poems past just the physical side of human nature. It's the hope, at least.
i only receive transmission
and that’s what you offer
Oh wow. Thank you for this. I appreciate that.
Gorgeous verse Sapphra! The word pictures are descriptive enough to feel her desire.
"surrendering as a choice, as an active movement into vulnerability", the thought of surrendering into vulnerability - I think this perfectly describes my submissive tendencies. I've thought about this alot over the years, how a strong man can submit: give up control to another. This makes it so clear.
Thank you so much. I’m glad that this poem resonated with you on a deeper level.
I absolutely love how You shared the thought process behind the words. I often wonder what is behind the writer’s intent. How we interpret each piece is based on our own experiences. I love knowing the meaning behind the projection. Thank You. It is beautiful.
Thank you. I always try to include a little bit of background on the poem. I used to use it as an introduction to the poem, but it felt more like I was leading the reader, which dilutes the poem. Lately, I’ve been adding it to the end so I can really get into the nitty-gritty after the reader has experienced the poem naturally.